hey really good story, love your writing style. I wish you would write another Zak fic, its so hard to find decent stories, i hope to see a new one sometime!
Sorry if this is a random comment, idk how long ago you posted but I search Zak and Ghost Adventures stories every other week or so for something new... Anyway!
I loved this! its cute and funny and I loved it.
You should do a Zak story, I would read it, i try to read all the Zak stories on here and have a few of my own...