Maybe Things Will Change. Apparently I Was...Right? - Comments

  • markme21

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    Ahhh thank you. I'm glad I could have helped. The chapter is great. I'm excited to read more.
    September 25th, 2013 at 06:04pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    I can't even express words. please update soon. Let the baby be ok... oh em gee.
    February 8th, 2013 at 07:43am
  • markme21

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    This story has me to hooked! I can't believe Emma would be so low like that. I hope the baby is okay but if not it could be an interesting story twist. Keep up the good writing.
    October 10th, 2012 at 05:09am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! I'M SUBSCRIBED. k just sayin that if you kill that baby off or anything happens to it I WILL BE KILLING EMMA! I will go in to your story and murder your character.... Please please update soon!
    October 9th, 2012 at 10:12am
  • domi09k

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    Hey i really like your story and i really wanna know what happens next so can you update it pleaseeeee
    August 16th, 2012 at 03:07am
  • BananaILoveYou.

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    I thought she killed herself. Or was I dreaming? Or was it another story x.x
    February 9th, 2012 at 11:19pm
  • Tofindme

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    poor Kenny :(
    February 9th, 2012 at 02:56am
  • MrsSnowLover

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    Hey,
    Just finished reading this story and i really like it
    hope you update soon :D
    January 4th, 2012 at 12:54pm
  • reeseynicole21

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    Update soon..
    December 12th, 2011 at 01:42am
  • LovedDove1117

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    So i just finished reading your story Maybe things will change. i thought i was great story. some parts were lacking a little bit but i can understand cause life is busy and you can always write the best that you can. anyway i also noticed a few spelling errors. but i didnt care cause i suck as spelling as well and as long as i could figure out what you meant to type i was fine.i thought it was a really good story and i cant wait to find out what happens to Kenny. I hope the baby is okay it would really suck if something happen to it and Kenny. Anyway cant wait to read your next chapter!
    December 12th, 2011 at 12:45am
  • Zorua

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    Eh, I didn't like this. I hate to write the comment where I don't like everything, but the first chapter turned me off with the stereotype in the beginning. "The girl with her two best friends going to a party, and they doll her up because she's the shy one and the best friends are loud and obnoxious." Then I just stopped reading when I saw the spelling errors "beet" and "base" which are supposed to be "beat" and "bass". I don't mean to offend you, I just wanted to give you some criticism. Don't let this hinder your writing though, keep on writing, because a lot of people like this.
    December 11th, 2011 at 08:00pm
  • june1998

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    this is really good update soon please and i think emma's a fat bitch !!!<33333
    August 25th, 2011 at 06:21am
  • Tofindme

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    Oh no Emma knows.
    July 6th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • Tofindme

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    update soon
    June 29th, 2011 at 04:55pm
  • Tofindme

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    This story always makes me wonder whats next.
    update soon
    June 24th, 2011 at 03:43am
  • akanevampire19

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    That was so sweet! =D
    June 24th, 2011 at 01:58am
  • Tofindme

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    update soon.
    June 22nd, 2011 at 04:26pm
  • Baby.We're.Burning

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    I love how this is turning out! & Ethan's mom POV sounds pretty cool. Haha keep updating!(:
    June 22nd, 2011 at 04:06am
  • Tofindme

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    Holy chiz Ethans dad is such a jerk. But Ethans mom is so sweet.
    June 20th, 2011 at 06:57pm
  • akanevampire19

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    That was so hard.... I want to know why his father react that way.
    June 19th, 2011 at 03:22am