This story has me to hooked! I can't believe Emma would be so low like that. I hope the baby is okay but if not it could be an interesting story twist. Keep up the good writing.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! I'M SUBSCRIBED. k just sayin that if you kill that baby off or anything happens to it I WILL BE KILLING EMMA! I will go in to your story and murder your character.... Please please update soon!
So i just finished reading your story Maybe things will change. i thought i was great story. some parts were lacking a little bit but i can understand cause life is busy and you can always write the best that you can. anyway i also noticed a few spelling errors. but i didnt care cause i suck as spelling as well and as long as i could figure out what you meant to type i was fine.i thought it was a really good story and i cant wait to find out what happens to Kenny. I hope the baby is okay it would really suck if something happen to it and Kenny. Anyway cant wait to read your next chapter!
Eh, I didn't like this. I hate to write the comment where I don't like everything, but the first chapter turned me off with the stereotype in the beginning. "The girl with her two best friends going to a party, and they doll her up because she's the shy one and the best friends are loud and obnoxious." Then I just stopped reading when I saw the spelling errors "beet" and "base" which are supposed to be "beat" and "bass". I don't mean to offend you, I just wanted to give you some criticism. Don't let this hinder your writing though, keep on writing, because a lot of people like this.