The Playmate vs. The Lead Singer - Comments

Aha! So he does think of Lexy..... I actually kind of like how Holly and Jack are interacting. They're, dare I say it, cute. So what will Jackary do next? Keep it coming love. I adore it.

awh i love this story!
but jack, seriously pick one! *cough* alex *cough*

AHA,
so there IS hope for their love.
(:

This is such a cute story! I'm really looking forward to more updates (:

Aw Alex.
He needs to like, seduce Jack or something

Dude! OMG! Serious tension going on. I mean wow. I love it. It's doing really well my dear. I'm so ready for the story to keep coming!

Sounds like shit's about to go down o.o
I watched Holly's World last night and Holly was video chatting with Jack in an ATL shirt and I never approved of their relationship before, but fuck they're cute together.
Alex still needs to win this battle though.

I just all three chapters, and I'm interested to see how the drama's all going to go down!

I like this(:

i love this story so much, it's one of my favourite ATL FF's <3333
great plot idea!
this can only go downhill for Alex, poor bby </3
please update soon!

“This is my good friend Holly. Holly this is Jack and Alex, there in All Time Low"
There should be they're. Otherwise, this was really good and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

You finally updated! I am pleased! This also pleases the Kirkenbunny. You should know what I speak of. Anywho! I'm so excited. You did so well with setting this up. I can't wait to see what happens next.

its all good,
just glad you updated (:

an update would be much appreciated!

Oooh... I can't wait to see where this goes.

Holy crap! I didn't realize you'd already posted this! I'm so excited. So so excited!

ahhhh me loves it already!
urgh Holly'll be in the next chapter -_-
can't wait for more!

I thought I had subscribe :/ but now Iam :)

I can tell this is going to be an awesome story, and I can't wait to see what happens :)

Update soon please

ahhhhhh I love this already!
Jalex ftw!
I can tell this is going to be a fun story =]

Woot! It's started :D
If Holly wins this, I swear I will punch a baby. JALEX FTW!