August 12th, 2012 at 03:11am
Real World: Malibu - Comments
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This was amazing! Update soon? :)August 12th, 2012 at 01:07am
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@ bmayo20602123
Thank you tonsss ! <3 (: I'm editing the chapter now, so hopefully it'll be up by the end of the day (:August 11th, 2012 at 09:44pm -
@ MusicIsMyEscapeee
Absolutely LOVED it!!!!!:) I wanna know what happens next!!!!! :)August 10th, 2012 at 04:44am -
@bmayo20602123
I swear you're a mindreader or something ! I'm writing the next chapter right now ! I had a bit of writer's block; but I hope I'm over it now ! Thank you ! (: How do you like the story ? (:August 7th, 2012 at 01:23am -
UPDATE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! :DAugust 6th, 2012 at 05:08am
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thank you soo much ! It's exam time for me right now, but then it'lll be summer so I'll update a lot then ! But I won't be able to update for about 2 weeks.May 31st, 2012 at 04:02pm
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I just found this story, and I love it sooo much:D Update soon!May 31st, 2012 at 03:07am
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Woah. Wasn't expecting that for ch. 21. but uhh, yeah. &HI CINDY (:April 27th, 2011 at 01:15pm
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love the update :DApril 8th, 2011 at 09:46pm
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love the update :DMarch 2nd, 2011 at 08:30pm
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love the update :DFebruary 16th, 2011 at 10:28pm
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Aww, Thanks. :D I thought it was really bad actually. haha. But thanks, means a lot. :DJanuary 27th, 2011 at 04:29am
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love the update :DJanuary 26th, 2011 at 08:19pm
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Thank you guys. :DJanuary 26th, 2011 at 06:34am
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love this so far :DJanuary 3rd, 2011 at 09:53pm
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OMG plz update soon!!
i luv ur story!!!December 30th, 2010 at 07:19am -
Oh, and thanks for the compliment. :DDecember 30th, 2010 at 03:57am
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Sorry, that's just how I usually write. Even in class. It's a habit of mine that I really need to break. But I've been doing it since middle school.December 30th, 2010 at 03:57am
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Whoa! So the story line is great, but what turned me off were some of the grammar and punctuation mistakes. "Hey, are you okay ? ." There should not be a period behind the question mark, and the question mark should be directly behind the last word of the sentence. Also, you should not do this either, "and guess what. ?" there should not be a period in there at all. It's a very good plot, just needs improvement.December 30th, 2010 at 03:43am
Thank you thank you thank youuu ! (: I thought the events were kinda random, but it seemed to flow so, i just went with it. haha. I will try and write the next chapter soon (: I wanna type up a one shot i have written down, and school starts soon, so i usually write chapters during class. haha. Hopefully it'll be up in a week or two (: Thanks for reading this story (: