I'm kind of hooked on this story! You're main character gives the bad ass vibe and i love the way you built her! Hah can't wait for the next chapter! Update please!!
awesome !!! nice fight! i like how the brothers are all ready fighting over her. this is going to be an interesting story. cant wait for the next chapter. good job!. :)
Pleaseeeeee dooooo try to hurry with the updatinggggggg(: