February 3rd, 2011 at 04:26am
This chapter seemed much more relaxed, and easy.
Happy. Normal.
I liked it :)
I'm so excited to see what happens in the future!
How everything plays out, you know?
Love this story <3
If You Took the Time to Notice Me - Comments
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January 31st, 2011 at 02:26am
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What other word can I describe this...? Cute?
Definitely!!! <3 !t :DJanuary 30th, 2011 at 08:07pm -
I like Donna already :)
And no word from Gerard, either, which I also like.
Nothing's rushed when it comes to bringing him and Melissa together. Nothing feels rushed. I hate rushed!
Mikey is also probably one of the most adorable people. Ever <3
Loved it! Can't wait for more!January 22nd, 2011 at 11:46pm -
Oh Mikey! He's so cute!January 22nd, 2011 at 07:21pm
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You say you have the next chapter but haven't posted it yet. What's up with that? Haha, just kidding... But not really. I wanna read it! :)January 21st, 2011 at 11:35am
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Ohh I really like this story! I can't wait for you to update. :)January 10th, 2011 at 10:47am
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Aw, poor Mikey!
I'm glad that he and Melissa met, though. They both need good friends. [It was also extremely adorable how excited Mikey was to take her home to meet Donna!]
And then Gerard picking them up at the end was icing on the cake!
Though, I did read the character descriptions, so I do kinda know where this is going, haha.
I just feel bad that Mikey's going to develop a crush on Melissa and her and Gerard are going to fall in love!!! I think... haha
This is a lot of ramble for a comment!
Loved the chapter <3January 10th, 2011 at 03:55am -
I want more!!! I love this!!!January 10th, 2011 at 12:58am
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I love updates!
Especially good ones! :)January 6th, 2011 at 02:28am -
This is awesome!! (:January 5th, 2011 at 02:46am
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This story is amazing! I am in love with the plot!January 4th, 2011 at 11:12pm
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I love this!!!! Your stories are always good!January 4th, 2011 at 10:49pm
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oh my gosh, this is wonderful! :D you're a lovely writer yourself; the plot so far is really strong and i'm really looking forward to the next chapter :D :D <3January 4th, 2011 at 03:12am
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I really loved the first two chapters.
Very lonely, and raw, and real.
I agree with the previous commenters, breath taking and beautiful.
I'm sure the next chapter, and the others to come, will consume me just as much as the first two.
:)January 3rd, 2011 at 04:43am -
This is breathtakingly amazing.
Wow, I seriously liked the intro ;DJanuary 2nd, 2011 at 01:14am -
This is beautiful. I can't wait to read more!December 28th, 2010 at 09:33pm
Mikey's got it baaaaad for Melissa :)
And I wonder if Gerard usually joins the family for dinner, or if he just did it because Melissa was over! ;)
This was another cute, normal chapter.
I really love this story! <3