oh god what a beautiful flow. the whole piece just /sang/. it's a very visceral and sensual experience, reading this. it nearly took my breath away xD btw i decided i can never do a review as indepth and as awesome as yours, so i'll just comment on five of your pieces to make up for it. they layout is so perfect too; if it were printed on paper i'd imagine it'd smell like roses or strawberries or a very fragrant perfume. even if the layout didn't capture the piece with how pink it is, it would show through the prose. the details are just gorgeous, so close i can almost kiss/smell/taste them. it's essentially a sex scene, but it doesn't feel that way, the way that fairytales feel real but not at the same time. the breasts rise like the moon. is my favorite line. not only because of how unique but utterly fitting it is, but it reminds me of evening primroses that bloom only at night, which matches the feminity of the entire prose.
April 14th, 2011 at 11:07pm
