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  • byeitsbeenfun

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    AWW poor johnny boy. Can I just like adopt him?! alksdjfklajg

    OH MY GOD THREE WEEKS.

    Lauren, you're a genius
    June 21st, 2011 at 07:33pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    such an amazing chapter <3
    hunter should go and visit john during the tour and they should talk then :D
    <3
    June 21st, 2011 at 06:54pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    XO
    June 21st, 2011 at 06:41pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    halvo is so cute for covering up
    i really hope john and hunter talk it out...
    cannot wait for next chapter <3
    June 20th, 2011 at 08:46pm
  • vices

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    anyways, this was a lovely chapter(:
    IT SHOWED JOHN WAS ACTUALLY A MAN, and that he could cry(:
    hell, I wanna cry for him D:
    I loved this chapter so much, *love.
    I love this story to pieces(:
    nah, I actually love all of your stories<3
    June 20th, 2011 at 02:35am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    UPDATE! XD
    June 14th, 2011 at 06:55pm
  • roll_your_eyes_at_me

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    I'm actually really excited to see the next chapter... Update, yeah?
    June 12th, 2011 at 09:45pm
  • the-perfectmistake

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    keeeeeeeeeeeeep writing! its amazing!
    June 12th, 2011 at 07:00pm
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    GUT FEELING.
    I HAVE THAT GUT FEELING.

    She better not be having sex with Halvo
    this time, forreall.
    lmfaaao.
    I had to say that.

    Garrett is such a little guy.
    I mean, he can say so much shit about people
    but i couldn't imagine him beating someone up.

    "You didn't make out with her, did you?" Garrett snapped. "Did you make a move on my girlfriend?! Did you touch her?!"

    "Garrett, no," John said, shaking his head. "Weren't you with her the whole time?"

    "I was, actually..." Garrett said, nodding. "So, go on."

    That ^^^ was my all time favorite part.
    I love this story.

    I can't wait toooo see how John and Hunter work their
    problems out.
    :D
    June 12th, 2011 at 04:00am
  • unlove

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    I really, really like this chapter! I like how Garrett and Jared are helping John with his dilemma. They are so funny, haha. I hope all goes well when John confronts Hunter about it!
    June 12th, 2011 at 01:12am
  • Anthem.

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    Okay, Garrett assuming John would do something with clayton was a no no. Garrett isnt really sensitive at all, and hes kind of harsh about sensitive things. John crying makes me sad. I love how you were point on about all the guys on their emotions though. Jared is the oldest so that would make him more mature about everything.Garebear doesnt have the right to calI Hunter a whore and Jared is right that people DO DO stupid things when they are intoxicated. Halvo is risking a lot just by covering up the bigger lie. just think about when John finds out that it was really Ross and not Halvo. i mean then all three of them are going to be in some shit there. so it would have just been easier to tell john the day after (or two) that Hunter and Ross hooked up, while being drunk. WHY YOU LEAVE IT ON CLIFF HANGER?!?! BIG NO NO! Update soon chicka. (:
    June 12th, 2011 at 12:41am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 8th, 2011 at 07:14pm
  • byeitsbeenfun

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    WHEN HALVO AND HUNTER HAD SEX I WAS SCREAMING

    WHAT?! WHAT?! WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON?!

    and then when John called her a whore i was like'
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    WHAT
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    very good.... vfojosfhjoih
    June 6th, 2011 at 09:35pm
  • vices

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    GIRL, YOU DESERVE EVERY SINGLE COMMENT/SUBSCRIPTION/READER YOU GET(:
    DON'T DOUBT IT.
    Anyways, this chapter made me so sad):
    I mean, sure, it was wrong and all, but still!
    John never gave her a chance to talk, and things could've been easier on him if he did let her talk.
    I HOPE THEY DO SEE EACH OTHER BEFORE HE LEAVES):
    And I feel the worst for Halvo.
    I don't care how much I've said it, I'll say it so much more.
    I FEEL BAD FOR HALVO. D':
    update soon, por favor(:
    June 6th, 2011 at 07:15am
  • troubleinatanktop

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    GARRETT IS NOT ALLOWED, UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES, TO ENCOURAGE A BREAK UP. I SHAN'T STAND FOR IT!
    John and Hunter are golden together. They can shine through this. <3
    June 6th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • lovefool

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    Aww!! Nice chapter!! I'm kind of sad at John :( he's soo heartbroken!!
    June 5th, 2011 at 08:10am
  • thescenekid

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    This is good!! John is so cute! He still need his momma!! Update soon, idol!
    June 5th, 2011 at 08:08am
  • unlove

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    I feel bad for John. Garrett better talk some sense into him. Haha.
    June 5th, 2011 at 12:23am
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    awww john is gonna forgive her but she needs to tell him the real truth
    June 4th, 2011 at 08:18pm
  • roll_your_eyes_at_me

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    I really love Halvo. Like he is the best "hero" in a story ever.. Sacrificing his freindship for a stupid little college boy who is a fuck tart (Ross)... But I hope Hunter and Halvo's relationship stays purely friends... I'm excited to see what Garett has to say...
    Update soon.
    BYE.
    June 4th, 2011 at 07:58pm
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