Business. - Comments

I love it, and I can't wait until the next chapter. I really wanna see where this goes. :))

this is...different.
and i love it.
i did find one little error: Jones nervously looked Reese
did you mean: at Reese?
but other than that this was great.
i'm most deff. subbing to see where this might be going!

Wow Danii, wow

extraordnary writhing. keep going.

Oh jesus! Organ stealers. Dealers? I don't know. But holy shit! That's freaking awesome, in a morbid way! I love this :3

This is amazing. I loved Jimmy and Jones is a creeper. I don't know much about Repo Men, just what I seen from a few clips but damn, this is amazing.

“Whatever happened to the numbers between fifteen and ten?” Jones gasped, his hands shaking a bit.

“I don’t like them. However, I like them more than I like you. So, I take it back. Three, two – ”

^^ That was fucking amazing and I loved it. And I did find a typo, my one and only (not to mention favorite) nitpicking babygirl (; --> "And the deal with for you to pay up front" I believe the word you are looking for there is "was". "And the deal was for you to pay up front" But that was all I found. I love you. And that was amazing. And I was right in telling you to jump in feet first. <3

Really different, I like it :)

Alice in Wonderland reference, Repo! outline, and something different...That's what I've noticed so far. I don't think I noticed any mistakes but I've never been overly fantastic with the tiny detail...nice temp layout, want me to post it to the board or wait till it's finished?

(first comment, booyah! :P )
I really like where you're going with this. It's good.
And I know you type like a maniac, but try to watch for typos. :P (I think there's one in one of the descriptions...)
Other than that, it's incredible and I can't wait for Chapter 2. :)