Into the Ocean - Comments

I love the song Into the Ocean by Blue October and I was extremely thrilled to see that this was somewhat (maybe) inspired by it.

I love your descriptions, they're different than descriptions I read in any other story. I really love how vague you were while describing this character's getting pulled out to sea, it's very refreshing and I really liked it.

I felt shocked, I feel as though this is all this girl's fault but then I think that the girl could also be the ocean. There's just so much that could be taken from this, very nice and again, I really like it and enjoyed it.

THIS. IS. BEAUTIFUL.
Oh God, your language, what is raging in the ocean-like emotions of the narrator,
how they're soaking it all in, how it's going on outside, like currents that move the
story forward and drag down the storyteller... it breaks my heart, in so many salty,
delicious ways. This is gorgeous oh gosh.

I love this song, and I loved this too. It was written very well and it was interesting. It made me wonder a lot about the narrator and what happened to him. I absolutely loved it!