You're Quite a Heartbeat (Shine Like Million) - Comments

I'm surprised this story hasn't been taken off here yet. There are still so many mistakes in this, it is really quite unbelievable. I am puzzled, baffled, 100% perplexed right now. OMG, OMG, OMG. SHE FLEW BY HER OWN WINGS, BUT NOW THESE WINGS ARE BROKEN, BABY. What a shiit story, seriously. CHIN up doeeeee, Rachel. And keep writing (no sarcasm).

Seriously, fuck off.

I saw nothing but mistakes in it.

Shiit story.

Ah I really like the way you write! And I totally was reminded of Kelly when I read that conversation :)

Your story title is foals lyrics. I haven't read a word of this story, but I know it'll be good because you listen to Foals. Thank you for being probably the only mibban who listens to them :)

I HOPE THIS COMMENT IS NO SUFFICIENT.
So yeah, I can't read this seriously.
Because all I can think about is fookin Kelly, EVERYTIME THIS CHICK SPEAKS.
THANK YOU.
And this is NOT shit, just so you know.
So I hope you like this comment.
Oh and one more thing.
YOU'RE A WANKA.

I love this story! It's different. Keep writing.
Please(:

This story is a-a-a-amazing!
Keep up the good work!

Yeah, for first comments..
I love it.
It's so good.
And well since yeah, it's different, I love it even more.