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  • Emery Quasimodo

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    I'm surprised this story hasn't been taken off here yet. There are still so many mistakes in this, it is really quite unbelievable. I am puzzled, baffled, 100% perplexed right now. OMG, OMG, OMG. SHE FLEW BY HER OWN WINGS, BUT NOW THESE WINGS ARE BROKEN, BABY. What a shiit story, seriously. CHIN up doeeeee, Rachel. And keep writing (no sarcasm).
    June 15th, 2011 at 06:42pm
  • backt0theburrow

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    Seriously, fuck off.
    June 13th, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • Emery Quasimodo

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    I saw nothing but mistakes in it.
    June 13th, 2011 at 04:28am
  • Emery Quasimodo

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    Shiit story.
    June 13th, 2011 at 04:27am
  • It's Just Bones

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    Ah I really like the way you write! And I totally was reminded of Kelly when I read that conversation :)
    January 30th, 2011 at 05:42am
  • It's Just Bones

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    Your story title is foals lyrics. I haven't read a word of this story, but I know it'll be good because you listen to Foals. Thank you for being probably the only mibban who listens to them :)
    January 30th, 2011 at 04:37am
  • the-tommo;;

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    I HOPE THIS COMMENT IS NO SUFFICIENT.
    So yeah, I can't read this seriously.
    Because all I can think about is fookin Kelly, EVERYTIME THIS CHICK SPEAKS.
    THANK YOU.
    And this is NOT shit, just so you know.
    So I hope you like this comment.
    Oh and one more thing.
    YOU'RE A WANKA.
    January 30th, 2011 at 04:14am
  • SKQueen

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    I love this story! It's different. Keep writing.
    Please(:
    December 29th, 2010 at 07:22pm
  • three-imaginaryboys

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    This story is a-a-a-amazing!
    Keep up the good work!
    December 29th, 2010 at 05:25pm
  • the-tommo;;

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    Yeah, for first comments..
    I love it.
    It's so good.
    And well since yeah, it's different, I love it even more.
    December 29th, 2010 at 05:34am
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