Pandora's Box - Comments

Oh man this is getting interesting! Some of your characters I don't recognize, but others I do, like Frankenstein and Voldemort and (as I read in the summary) Juliet and Darth Vader. I'm interested to see what happens next. I like how you've kept it kind of mysterious, leaving the reader wondering what is this mission thing that they are collecting people for and why these specific people. I like how puzzled Voldemort is by their magic. Now if only Hogwarts had had these guys on their side, Voldemort would have been taken down years ago.... ah alas but that would mean less Potter books and less of a story. Nevermind my previous comment then. Anyways great story and I look forward to your next chapter! Please update soon!! :-p

Hey, so i just read your first chapter but i found it all a bit confusing, i just feel like you were trying to mix it up a bit and so you added all those different characters from different stories and i feel like i just lost interest, no offence.

However, i do like your style or writing it seems rather fresh and thought out and like youve planned the chapter adn what you wanted to do. Good luck with the rest of your story.

I think this is a rather amusing piece so far :) I like how you've got all of these characters from different stories and how they're brought together for a purpose we're not too sure of yet. But I like how all the personalities of these characters are very different from the others - so you have that amusement in there. :) Especially with Voldemort and Frankenstein. :) And, my heart leapt with joy in the narration when Frankenstein was mentioned as the Doctor and not the monster! I could shower you will all the lovely things in the world - it drives me nuts when people get that wrong. ;) Any who. While it's all entertaining, you have very good character development - and everything is still at that hazy phase, but there's a small amount of development that makes the reader curious. :)

I do wonder if this will be carried on at all...it's rather amusing, and it would be lovely to see how everything pans out. :)

I really like this. You introduced the characters clearly and developed their personalities through their speech and actions rather than just clearly listing them. I felt you made them realistic and easy to relate to.
I love all the characters in this (Violet is an excellent name by the way! ;]) and it seems like a really clever plot. It'll be interesting to see how you develop this.
I also love your descriptions, they're realy gripping and every word works well together.
Well done.

This was rather funny, and I loved to referances to all the different characters(:

I thought the story was funny, and it has a good sense of humor. Please write more! :)