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  • anessaatl13

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    This was nicely written, the only things you can fix are grammar, and spacing :) I really like your writing style, you should definitely keep it up! Great job! :)
    October 2nd, 2011 at 05:33am
  • emmzarr

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    OMG OMG.
    Amazing. I loved it c:
    Can you write another story? but make it much longer? :')
    January 29th, 2011 at 07:05pm
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    sdfjghsaghfksahdgs.
    YAY! Alex is loved :3
    December 29th, 2010 at 02:33pm
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    Oh my god, this is amazing!
    Bring on the next chapter :D
    December 28th, 2010 at 03:18pm
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