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  • Lo_east

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    This is cute
    November 30th, 2012 at 05:20am
  • simply me

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    Loving it. Update soon.
    November 29th, 2012 at 02:43am
  • coralreefs;

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    LOVE.
    November 25th, 2012 at 08:58pm
  • chey1235

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    I love this story soo much!! Very Happy i really, really, really hope that you update soon Cute by the way, i love their outfits Smile
    October 18th, 2012 at 01:29am
  • laylalovesyou

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    update? please? :3 i love how i'm the last three people to comment
    September 3rd, 2011 at 05:35pm
  • laylalovesyou

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    awwwwwh! I just love this story. Another chapter please?
    July 23rd, 2011 at 05:25am
  • laylalovesyou

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    I demand another chapter lol :3
    July 15th, 2011 at 05:10pm
  • xxLoveAllxx

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    My favorite story on Mibba! Update asap!(:
    July 13th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • laylalovesyou

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    awwwh, i love conner! update soon please!
    July 7th, 2011 at 07:17pm
  • Totlo_Wolf

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    PLEASE WRITE ON, IT'S ADDICTING!!!!!!

    And THANK YOU for being one of the ONLY people who uses "characters". THANK YOU.
    July 5th, 2011 at 06:08pm
  • xxLoveAllxx

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    loooove this! please update more!!
    June 14th, 2011 at 06:55am
  • laylalovesyou

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    i loveee this story! please update soon! (:
    June 14th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • Piranha Priya

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    I LOVE THIS STORY.
    It's amazingly funny.
    Not to mention i loved how Connor got rejected.
    Trust me I've done the same thing when boys donthe once over!
    UPDATE SOON <3
    April 25th, 2011 at 04:34am
  • Mrs. Brown

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    wow this is a great story, your very talented! write more soon!
    April 3rd, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • dirt whispered.

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    Just found this.
    Loved it! Seriously, I love finding good original stories on here. And yours definitely sounds like it will be good. And that's coming from reading only a prologue.
    Please update soon? Please.
    I'm excited to read this story. :)
    January 20th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • kitsch

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    Am I strange for thinking that was a cute prologue?
    Probably. Anyway, I really liked it.

    The protagonist is such a down to earth girl,
    and dare I say we'd be friends because of
    our similar outlooks on the Golden State? (;

    There were minor errors I caught, but other than
    that, it was nicely written. The details were divine.

    Seriously, no one cares how toned on ripped you are.
    I believe that you meant 'or.'

    I was done with being walk all over.
    Word choice; 'walked.'

    I can't wait to read the rest of this story. <3
    December 29th, 2010 at 06:11am
  • Lo_east

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    aw this is cool. i like it. subscribe.
    your a tallented writerrrr
    December 29th, 2010 at 06:03am
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