Woah...that's not cereal.... - Comments

LOVED IT

*giggles*
the pig thingy was funny!!
And Matt is so sweet to her!!!
Corny as hell, but still sweet!!
I LOVE IT!!
I can't wait for more!!

YAY FOR THIS BEING UPDATED!!

Aww! So cute! Bahaha.
And you're pretty good at dialogue, are ya kidding me?

HAHA, BRIAN HAD IT COMING!!
ALSO, I LOVED THE LATEST UPDATE

YEY!!!
THEY'LL BE GOING OUT TO LUNCH!!!
*giggles*
I hope Brian apologizes for being such an ass....
anywhos...
I LOVE IT!!!
more please!!

omg.
omg.
omg.
omg.

i cryed my eyes out when i read her story :(

this is one of the best storys on mibba.
just to put ca bity of critisism in...i gets a little confused at times because its not written in a way im used to. you should read the guides. you havbe to leave a gap between speeces and start of speeces should be on a new line.

but i love the story so far. im subscribing xD
look forward to regular comments on reghular updates.

Mell..Fayye..xXx

wow!!
poor girl!!

I like it. But, with the dialouge to make it easier on the reader maybe you could seperate it. I have no clue if you know what I mean or not, but either way I like it. I do believe I will subscribe.

wowsies....
Her story was so tragic!!!!
*sniff*
It makes me wanna hit all the people who hurt her!!!
Or kill them....
Either or...
anywhos....
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
MORE PLEASE!!!

Oh dear. Oh dear.
I don't know what to say. Oh dear.
Update soon please : )

omg wow i can't wait to read more

Oh, I loveeee this, please update?

Please?

Probably one of the most amazing stories I've read on Mibba 8 )

take ur time

WOW!!
I WONDER WHAT HAPPENED TO HER TO CHANGE HER LIKE THAT?!

Don't worry, I'll still be reading ^_^

Hurry I wanna no wat happens to them

That better be them trying to scare the boys.

OMFG!!
I HOPE THEY'RE OKAY!!

hey love the story can't wait to read more. :)