Woah...that's not cereal.... - Comments

  • bloodravyn

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    LOVED IT
    May 5th, 2008 at 05:46am
  • Demon Ninja

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    *giggles*
    the pig thingy was funny!!
    And Matt is so sweet to her!!!
    Corny as hell, but still sweet!!
    I LOVE IT!!
    I can't wait for more!!
    Smiley
    April 23rd, 2008 at 11:17pm
  • bloodravyn

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    YAY FOR THIS BEING UPDATED!!
    April 22nd, 2008 at 08:03am
  • kathy r00lz.

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    Aww! So cute! Bahaha.
    And you're pretty good at dialogue, are ya kidding me?
    April 21st, 2008 at 02:51am
  • bloodravyn

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    HAHA, BRIAN HAD IT COMING!!
    ALSO, I LOVED THE LATEST UPDATE
    March 30th, 2008 at 12:44pm
  • Demon Ninja

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    YEY!!!
    THEY'LL BE GOING OUT TO LUNCH!!!
    *giggles*
    I hope Brian apologizes for being such an ass....
    anywhos...
    I LOVE IT!!!
    more please!!
    Smiley
    March 30th, 2008 at 04:21am
  • Through the Trees

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    omg.
    omg.
    omg.
    omg.

    i cryed my eyes out when i read her story :(

    this is one of the best storys on mibba.
    just to put ca bity of critisism in...i gets a little confused at times because its not written in a way im used to. you should read the guides. you havbe to leave a gap between speeces and start of speeces should be on a new line.

    but i love the story so far. im subscribing xD
    look forward to regular comments on reghular updates.

    Mell..Fayye..xXx
    March 29th, 2008 at 05:43pm
  • bloodravyn

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    wow!!
    poor girl!!
    March 13th, 2008 at 09:02am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    I like it. But, with the dialouge to make it easier on the reader maybe you could seperate it. I have no clue if you know what I mean or not, but either way I like it. I do believe I will subscribe.
    March 13th, 2008 at 05:29am
  • Demon Ninja

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    wowsies....
    Her story was so tragic!!!!
    *sniff*
    It makes me wanna hit all the people who hurt her!!!
    Or kill them....
    Either or...
    anywhos....
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
    MORE PLEASE!!!
    Smiley
    March 12th, 2008 at 11:30pm
  • littlebabyanything

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    Oh dear. Oh dear.
    I don't know what to say. Oh dear.
    Update soon please : )
    March 1st, 2008 at 06:28pm
  • Jade19

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    omg wow i can't wait to read more
    March 1st, 2008 at 08:54am
  • radical

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    Oh, I loveeee this, please update?

    Please?

    Probably one of the most amazing stories I've read on Mibba 8 )
    March 1st, 2008 at 12:43am
  • bloodravyn

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    take ur time
    February 26th, 2008 at 09:24am
  • bloodravyn

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    WOW!!
    I WONDER WHAT HAPPENED TO HER TO CHANGE HER LIKE THAT?!
    February 17th, 2008 at 07:36am
  • Unicorn.

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    Don't worry, I'll still be reading ^_^
    February 13th, 2008 at 10:27pm
  • Rachel_Elizabeth

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    Hurry I wanna no wat happens to them
    February 12th, 2008 at 12:36am
  • Unicorn.

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    That better be them trying to scare the boys.
    February 7th, 2008 at 07:44pm
  • bloodravyn

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    OMFG!!
    I HOPE THEY'RE OKAY!!
    February 7th, 2008 at 01:22pm
  • Jade19

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    hey love the story can't wait to read more. :)
    February 7th, 2008 at 01:35am