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  • aubs

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    I would have to say that this was a really wonderful drabble. It was short and sweet without droning on and on. It seemed that each word of it was overall vital to the piece as a whole; every word and every sentence was important to get the point across. My favorite line was the very last because, after thinking about it, was completely true. You have done a wonderful job with this.
    August 4th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • waves wash

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    I liked this.
    July 27th, 2011 at 07:55pm
  • nerdy_

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    I really enjoyed this because, as some of the others have pointed out, it's short, sweet, and to the point.

    I like the ending in particular. Your words about having all the time in the world if we didn't obsess over the hours and minutes stands true. It reminds me, also, of a quote that I just can't put my finger on.

    Hm, perhaps I'll remember it later on. In any case, I just wanted you to know that I read and enjoyed this reflection.
    June 13th, 2011 at 06:06pm
  • youth and whiskey.

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    This was great. Time really is something interesting, isn't it? This really made me ponder time and life itself - which I love doing. This really was wonderful. <33
    April 30th, 2011 at 06:54pm
  • I Am Death

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    This was wonderful :) I love the feeling it's left me with, to not bother about things. Getting old, etc. If time shall continue anyway thn what's the use in worring about it.
    Very lovely :)
    April 25th, 2011 at 07:24pm
  • Grace Dunne

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    I love short little blurbs like this. You say everything that needs to be said and then are done. This takes skill, most people have to drone on about this and that before actually making a statement.

    No fluff. I love it!
    March 17th, 2011 at 06:32pm