Well, I am at a stand still of what I want to say. It's descriptive, but yet not enough for me to be truly satisfied. I can't say I loved it, but I don't hate it. I liked it yet, I wished there was more. You know like a bit of back round information, and yet I feel like it didn't need anymore then it has right now. It wasn't confussing, but yet in its simplicity, it wasn't exactially easy to follow, then again I followed it perfectally.
Hmm, I realize this comment is constantally contradicting its self, but I can't help it. What I mean to say is that you shouldn't change anything but if you want to then go for it. *sighs* You have great potentual to be a great writer. So just continue to write and if I find them I'll continue to read.
Thanks for posting this and keep writing. I, well I enjoyed it.
Hmm, I realize this comment is constantally contradicting its self, but I can't help it. What I mean to say is that you shouldn't change anything but if you want to then go for it. *sighs* You have great potentual to be a great writer. So just continue to write and if I find them I'll continue to read.
Thanks for posting this and keep writing. I, well I enjoyed it.