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  • Blue_Eyes22

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    Wow. This was excellent. I'm a huge horror fan and I found myself reading and straining to hear any sounds that were out of the ordinary around me. It really got to me. Well done. Please write another like this.
    December 31st, 2010 at 05:04pm
  • herzschmerz

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    This is very eerie, I felt myself holding my breath as I was reading it. It was great, well done! You might want to correct it to 'blood-curdling scream' instead of 'curtailing'. Sorry, I'm a bit of a spelling freak. XD
    December 29th, 2010 at 09:36pm
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