Open Your Eyes - Comments

Okay this story is sad, I'm not going to lie, yes I got teary eyes :( this story has potentiall for more chapters... but everything was great grammar wise. and everything seemed to be described in lots of deatail... well done

This story made me really sad. I agree with AwesomeAsianAmy because Shay never got the chance to tell how he truly felt about her and so she will leave never knowing the truth. This story is generally well-written with only a few grammar mistakes that are often overlooked. I would love if u wrote another chapter 2 this story because I felt there is potential 4 more :)

This made my heart drop. In both disappointment (because she's leaving and Shay didn't tell her how he felt) and in happiness (because they're cute).
I think you should make a sequel to this, or a story, or something with a happy ending!
I love happy endings, even though they don't always exist. Which is why I like reading, because there's usually a happy ending.
Anyway, I'm just a huge fan of this story and I really think you should continue it somehow or another. (:
Tell me if you do, and I'll subscribe right away. :D

I liked this a lot.
Shay made me smile and go 'aww' inside.
I found a few mistakes - some grammatical, and some such as 'at' instead of 'and', or 'they' instead of 'the'. But I enjoyed it immensely.
Well done