Haha, that was one wicked awesome chapter! Spectacular :) I like the way the plot is going so far, and you have great length for the chapters! Keep up the good work! :D
Well Chapter 4&5 took me forever to finish, but I finally have and they are just as good, if not better than the others! Great job! Sooo glad I found this story!
Marvelous. Simply marvelous. I. Love. This. Story. It's so emotional, anything your characters feel, I feel and understand. You shouldn't give this up ever. Goodness... I also really like your chapter titles, creative and also full of emotion, I think this latest chapter was my favorite... maybe... no actually I take that back. All of them are amazing in different ways. Love it! (And I'm going to subscribe) I don't understand how you don't have more readers or comments. I'll be waiting for another chapter, spectacular job!