what in the god-damn fucking shit? it ends like that? Hunter....well now see, that kid needs to die. and i've held in all my comments on this because i've been reading this all over that past few days and didn't want to be, like, commenting on chapter 20 and being all tardy-to-the-party or whatever. but really? i want to fucking kill Hunter even more than i did before! and i definitely would have expected this shit out of caleb more than out of hunter, but i guess that kid's just really fucked up. i would say he needs to be raped with a broomstick, but he'd probably like that too much.
and on a less angry note: i love the hello kitty parts and how andy acts like she's their child. it makes me lol and the B.C. Rich Mockingbird? that is basically my dream guitar. i want one, just to have one, even though i wouldn't be able to play it very well. i fucking love that guitar with a passion. one thing i find funny though, is that i can't picture andy or ashley as adults here...i don't know why but i keep picturing them as either kids or highschoolers. and when andy talks, i can't picture his voice being deep like it is... but that's all probably because their childish personalities. and i love their kid-like personalities.
so yeah; overall conclusion? keep this going for sure and keep cranking out the updates, because i'm really excited for this. especially after how that just ended! but i love this...for sure
Hunter needs to be shoved in a very deep hole with snakes, spiders, and sharp sticks at the bottom so he dies a long painful death of pain. oh and poor ashley :(
OMG! Hunter deserves to be shot and thrown to a bunch of fans to ripped apart!!! I want to see the others beat the hell out of him!!! Freaking creeper deserves it! There is something seriously loose in his head to do that to not only Andy but Ashley too!! Please update soon!
Great! Now I’m hard = best line. Holy shit I normally don't like Andy on top but that was pretty hot. Way to put Ashley in his place. haha but Ashley's never going to let him do it again, ;)
Why does Ash feel so guilty?