Passionate Lies - Comments

I loved it.. :D Very clever, I thought he was cheating lol :D

I enjoyed this story a lot.

You totally had me on the wrong foot there! I was really annoyed by Brendon, thinking he was just another cheating bastard. The ending came as a surprise, but it is very clever.

The incorporation of the picture is very well done. I like the way you used the red hair.

I also liked the fact that you are showing another Brendon than I am used to. I haven’t read all that many stories where Brendon is older than the young adult he is right now, but I was pleasantly surprised by this setting.

Overall, a very nicely written story.

This was really good. I liked how you kept it with the red hair color.
And I was not expecting that ending.
I really did think he was having an affair.
You tricky little thing. =)

It's really different and I LOVE it!
Jen
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