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  • Bob de Ninja

    Bob de Ninja (100)

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    Wow! I really liked it a lot Mr. Green Please update soon.
    October 27th, 2012 at 08:56pm
  • ur_best_nightmare

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    I liked it a lot! The dream part was my favorite. When Vesta appeared, it was genuinely creepy.

    The chapter as a whole felt kind of...first draft though. There was a lot of text language and grammatical and spelling errors, which made the feeling of a real story disappear.

    Other than that though, it was pretty good! I TOLD YOU YOU SHOULD PUBLISH! :D
    January 2nd, 2011 at 12:32pm
  • Trenyce_896

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    i think its pretty good.update soon
    December 31st, 2010 at 06:41am
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