Ronnie and Juliet - Comments

alright, well...im back. haha.

so yes, this entry really did make me cry. a lot. Every detail, all the foreshadows [aside from the flashforwards which make it obvious] and the thought process of Juliet; the way the ending was a surprise but at the same time, it wasnt at all. at the same time, you felt her pain so much that you didn't quite blame her for what she did. i also felt that intense sympathy for craig, who obviously loves Juliet with all his heart as well, just unfortunately...not on a soulmate level. and for ronnies father...a big part of what made me cry was his part of the eulogy. every moment of this kept the reader hurting with juliet. this was amazing.

completely amazing job...<3

Molly Mental =]]

This was... absolutely amazing.
Completely tragic and heartbreaking, but amazing.
It was thought out extremely well, and very well written.
I bawled like a fucking baby.
Amazing job!

Dude, I NEVER cry in stories, and I cried when I read this. You're amazing and your writing is...DEAR GOD.

This was amazing, you wrote this very well and you should do very good in the contest, I hope you win :)

What are you trying to do? Make me cry really hard?
This was an amazing one shot.

I never cried like this over a story..ever..
I got to congratulate you on writing this story..To write a story with this much emotion...it's gotta be hard
:') ♥

i havent cried like this over a story in...a long, long time.

ill come back and fully comment later, i honestly...cant write a legitimate comment to save my life right now...yes, this entry really did hit me this hard...

Molly Mental