October 7th, 2011 at 08:14am
Eeeeep! I love the sound of this! The first chapter was brilliant, and I like how Lainey wrote her note on the back of a map with circled destinations! So clever (: The second chapter from her point of veiwe was perfect. I understand exactly what she means. Everyone is always telling me how I have suck potential and that I could be so many things if only I tried. You could go so far, they tell me, and that's exactly where I want to go - far away. Gah.
Chapter three was lovely. I liked the way you wrote the father's dialogue. It was very realistic, I think. That's exactly how I'd react if I were a parent. I like this story so far and can't wait for the next update! Subbing! (:
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Dammit, typos.
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