I really enjoyed this. The detail you go into with things makes me feel like I'm her. I can't wait to read more.
December 31st, 2010 at 01:46am
I like this story. It seems really nice. My constructive critism, is to actually make them paragraphs.
Like this, with the space right there. That way it isn't one huge paragraph, you know? Anyways, I enjoyed reading this and good luck to you!