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  • Draven;

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    Holy shit, that was a good twist! I can't wait for more :D
    And your art is really good! (I can barely draw Gir)
    *sigh* I love this
    October 22nd, 2011 at 01:11am
  • ScantilyClad

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    I adore the completely volitile relationship between Poison and Sands. You can see he gives a shit, particuarly when he's treadding carefully with her, trying to do what he feels best by her. It's sweet, in a slightly fucked up sort of way (but hey, it's 2019, everythings a little fucked)

    As for sands back story, I'm curious as to what exactly triggered her to run away from BLI in the first place, other than that it was so detailed and well thought out that I completely ignored anyone calling my name while I read it. And my heart broke for Sands a little when Coture died. Losing a friend is never easy and from what I've read, by that point she's already lost enough </3

    Wonderful chapter, can't wait for more <3
    October 15th, 2011 at 07:06am
  • WatchesFromShadows

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    "Sands always did what she wasn’t supposed to. It was a given. She wasn’t supposed to go out on her own. She wasn’t supposed to just stop and hang out in random houses in the zones. And so far as the guys had her figured, she wasn’t supposed to cry." LOVE. THIS. It seriously got to me.

    Okay. So. My reaction: O: Oh wow.... Poor Sands. I would be so traumatized/homicidal/disturbed if that happened to me. =[ And 12 still bores me. And I love Sands. And Poison's a dicknugget.

    ...All right, that is all. x] - WatchesFromShadows
    October 15th, 2011 at 03:38am
  • Draven;

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    ...Hot damn...
    October 15th, 2011 at 02:35am
  • ScantilyClad

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    Gonna do my best to give you guys a good comment with what little time I have.

    Have to say, the last three chapters have been pretty interesting. I was totally NOT expecting such a past to have come from Sands. I'm the sort of person who likes to try and predict what happens in stories, and I absolutely love it when I'm completely wrong %100 of the way. Especially when it's so well written. The last chapter was particularly wonderful, the scene set up with Chow Mein was on the verge of becoming a little intense, and I absolutely fucking LOVE the dialect you guys use. It's a little bad ass to tell the truth. Keep up the WONDERFUL work you two! :D
    October 8th, 2011 at 08:11am
  • Draven;

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    WhatHappens?WhatHappens?WhatHappens?WhatHappens?
    October 8th, 2011 at 03:27am
  • WatchesFromShadows

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    Well, I still don't get why she kept the whole "unmasking them is their final fall" thing hidden all this time. =/ I DO get why she didn't say first off that her dad is the sociopath behind this Hell. I mean, that's obvious.

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    But GOSHDARN, that was an awesome twist! :D - WatchesFromShadows
    October 2nd, 2011 at 05:17am
  • Draven;

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    :o Holy shit, that was a good twist
    October 1st, 2011 at 11:59pm
  • Draven;

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    This was worth the wait...And the chapter number (7) is my favorite number, so that made it even better :D
    October 1st, 2011 at 02:34am
  • AxelRoxSox

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    There's not enough love for this. It's really great, keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next update!
    September 30th, 2011 at 11:22pm
  • weirdohere

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    This is amazing yet again, can't wait for the next update
    September 30th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • ScantilyClad

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    Sooo I managed to eventually read through all this amidst my terrible multi-tasking, and I gotta say, I'm impressed, if not at least intrigued (thank you Catherine!)

    I honestly would never know how to work a good story with another author, but the two of you seem to to a pretty good job. I was admittedly a little trepidatious, your summary made it sound like a typical Killjoy fic, but I kept my promise and read anyway and I have to say I'm glad I did. Not just because it's actually well written, but because it takes the idea slightly off the beaten path. It doesn't follow the same routine everyone else seems to be. Although initially I was a little confused by the overlap at the beginning, but after that I got used to it quite easily and it began to read much more smoothly. I'm also enjoying the deep contrast between Silver Sands and Suspect 12's personalities, and the fact that their back stories seem like they're going to crash. And when I say crash, I don't mean that in a bad way at all! :D

    I hit that subscribe button pretty darn hard ;D
    September 28th, 2011 at 01:28pm
  • WatchesFromShadows

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    :D You're definitely welcome for suggesting The Viper's Bite! Glad you're into it! So yes. I luffs this story. ^_^ My fave character out of the two OC's is Silver Sands, mostly because it intrigues me that she's known these guys for a long time, and yet still no one knows anything about her. That, and I wouldn't trust Suspect 12 either, and I don't know why the guys already do. =/ Keep up the epicness! - WatchesFromShadows
    September 25th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • Draven;

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    Update again soon?
    September 25th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • Draven;

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    This chapter was great :D
    September 24th, 2011 at 04:13am
  • ThatFreakInTheCorner

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    Thanks for telling me! This is amazing ^_^.
    September 24th, 2011 at 12:38am
  • Draven;

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    Thank you for telling me about this, it's amazing :D
    September 23rd, 2011 at 03:07am
  • itwaspure

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    Thank you so much for telling me about this!!!!!!!!! I am most definitely subscribing ^_^ More soon, please oh please with Gerard Way's cherry red hair on top? X3

    xoxo
    Lexxi!
    September 23rd, 2011 at 02:29am
  • NoRaindropsOnRoses

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    Ooh! First comment! Awesome job, killjoys. =) I'm Methane Shallow, as far as killjoy names go. MCR freaks together! Whoo! Who doesn't love killjoys? I happen to be writing a story with two of my friends about us getting adopted by the band, and that's called Three Ways! if you're interested. =)
    September 23rd, 2011 at 01:36am
  • ART IS THE WEAPON

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    No comments?
    WHAT IS THIS!
    THIS IS AMAZING!
    HOW CAN YOU NOT COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????
    <3
    September 11th, 2011 at 05:48am