Comment Prize #1: I am soo glad you suggested this story, I loved it. It's well written and has an amazing story line/plot. I am subscribing. You are an amazing writer. my only critisism is that you might want to reread your story or have someone be an editor for you. There were places where the words were out of order or missing. This only appeared a few times but when it is there it's a bit confusing. otherwise though, like i said, this is amazing.