I adore the repetition in this, as it really drives home the concept behind it. She can't feel anything except that person holding onto her, or she's holding onto them, and I love that. The emotion in it, the sense of loneliness I felt as I read each perfect word, was the best part in my opinion. To connect emotionally with something you're reading, shows how well it was written. Everything about it was wonderful darling, to the wonderful adjectives you chose to the flawless way you ended it.
January 2nd, 2011 at 10:47am