Dreaming Out Loud - Comments

I want more!

Awesome story!!!!can't wait for more!!:)

Did Mia's move to New York have to do with Matt?
This is getting really good.
Looking forward to the next chapter, love.
By the way, I love your decriptions in every chapter. They make me feel like I'm there and watching the story take place rather than just reading it on my computer.

Reading chapter three made me wish that I was on better terms with my brother.
I really love the love and affection that are still present between MIa and her family even though they haven't seen each other in some time.
Makes me wonder though, would Mia have come home at all if her sister hadn't been involved in a car accident?

The guys' reactions to finding out what Mia does for a living cracked me up, I don't know why though haha.
I don't get it though, Mia seems to be on good terms with Zacky and the guys, so why so long between visits? And what was behind her decision to move to New York?
Onto chapter three.

I loved the prologue.
Definitely made me smile when I pictured a young Zacky munching happily on cookies.
The relationship between Mia and her family seems a little strained. Five years without going home is a really long time.
Can't wait to read the rest...which is what I'm going to do now.

Wow (responding to your answer)
Again I'm sorry about that and I'm glad your okay

Love how normal things were for Zacky and Mia lol
Can't wait to see what happens with Matt

Love this story !!!
Miyuh

I completely agree with what everyone else is saying: I missed the shit out of you and your writing & I'm fucking glad you're back! And I have to tell you, doll, you haven't lost your touch in the slightest.
Even after being away for so long, you still have that seamlessness to your writing that makes it incredibly easy to get lost in the storyline and everything the characters are going through. You pull the reader in from the first word and keep their eyes glued to the screen until the very end. And, as always, the whole thing is brutally realistic. As I was reading this I could totally see/feel everything Mia was seeing/feeling, as though I was actually living through her character. Seriously, dear, it's fucking amazing. Not many writers out there have such a knack for painting scenes or conveying thoughts and emotions in such a profound way.
Plus, I really like the vibe of this story! I mean, I can honestly see why it's so difficult for Mia to come back home after being away for so long, basically to find out that everyone has changed and, more importantly, that she has as well. It definitely adds the story's realness.
And with that, I'll just say again that I'm insanely happy you're back & that I hope you plan on continuing with this story and your writing in general. You talent speaks for itself, darling.
So more soon please! <3

I'm sorry you went through that!
I hope you're ok and you're doing well!
Great chapter! I love how you showed how Zacky is emotionally attached to Mia- it was alil' sad how he felt like he missed out on somethings with her.

A fucking coma ?!!!
Out of all things that's the last thing I'd have expected to read
Omg I'm so sorry
I hope your all healthy and well now
Don't be offended but i've always wanted to ask
When your in a coma when you wake up does it feel like you've had a long nap
And did you dream while you were sleep ?
Just curious...
Anywhoo
I really love this and I've missed it
I think I can really relate to Mia
Just wanting to get away and change

Can't wait for Matt to get involved
& I can't wait for more !
Miyuh

Definetly keep! I love this!

RAAAGAGH,
i missed you! and you're updates! D':
glad you're backk. <3

FUCKING BRILLIANT!
Bahaha, seriously, it's only like two chapters & I'm already in love with this story.
First of all, the plot is fucking interesting as hell. I really like the idea of Mia going away for five years & essentially coming back as a brand new woman, cuz I think that's actually quite realistic. When I was about 10 or so, I moved away from Texas to live in Utah/Idaho for a while, and at that time, I was a total girly-girl who wanted to grow up to be a ballerina and shit. But when I moved back, I was a fucking crazy metal chick, which undoubtedly freaked out a lot of my family members. Honestly, I don't think people realize how much they change over the years, but that's why I love the idea of this story. I mean, it's interesting to see how everyone (Zacky especially) copes with Mia's drastic changes, basically realizing that she's not the same little girl she used to be.
And now I'm fucking excited for Matt to see her, cuz he's gonna be like, whoa... O.o
Bahaha, seriously, doll, it's fucking amazing. Obviously, the reason Mia's back in Huntington in the first place is a devastating one, I'm thinking some good things will come from it. :)
And of course, your writing is as wonderful & vivid as ever. You put so much effort into everything you write and I fucking admire you for that.
So yeah, fuck, you need to update as soon as you can! I'm addicted already! <3

Can't wait for more :-)

I'm excited to see how this story will develop. I really like it so far!

Update soon :)

i loved how they fliped when they found out she model. plaze update soon.

I think its hilarious that the guys, especially Zacky can't get over that Mia is a model, lol
I can't wait to read on how the Baker parents are gonna say...
Matt too :D

Oh Zacky. You're so silly x)
Lovely update :D

Poor Amanda.
I really hope she's going to get better.
<3