The Air I Would Kill to Breathe. - Comments

this story i'm seriously sobbing and i can't even it's so GOOD god damn it

OH MY GOD PLEASE UPDATE I SWEAR TO GOD IM GONNA DIE IF I DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. Now that Im done with my rant i suggest you update before i sLIT YOUR THROAT WITH A BAR OF DEODORANT goddamnit.

OH MY GOD PLEASE UPDATE I SWEAR TO GOD IM GONNA DIE IF I DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. Now that Im done with my rant i suggest you update before i sLIT YOUR THROAT WITH A BAR OF DEODORANT goddamnit.

Oh my flying fucking God.
I just read this - ALL of this. Since yesterday's morning that I've been reading this story, and oh my God, wasn't it worth it!
I mean... the way you pulled me into this story, trapped me and then just kept me there is amazing, and it got to me so fast and furious that I won't be able to get out.
If you only know how damn much I was angry at Alex when he lied to Jack, fearing for Jack when he was in the hospital, pissed off at Sophie when the bitch kissed Jack... If you had only see, you would be surprised at how I hadn't flied to another alternate world where I was watching this story play before my eyes, and how I hadn't interveined yet.
Wow. I don't think I ever got this caught up in a story before! And it's not even over, yet! [Thankfully, 'cause I wanna read this until the day I die.]

I need to find more Jalex stories - you got me in love with Jalex.
I'm so glad this was the first Jalex I've read... Oh, God.
Give me more of this, please. I'm begging you. PLEASE!

XoXo.

I finally finished reading this and holy shit... I just adore this fic. Seriously. This is one of the best fics I've ever read and let's just say that I've read a lot.
But yeah... I love how they kinda made up. I still have a bad feeling in my gut. I have this feeling that Sophie will announce that she's pregnant or something. D: I'm kinda scared actually.
Just... I hope you'll continue soon. Okay?

has the story finished or will there be more??

Heeey! i just spent the last 7 hours reading this entire story, beginning, to your latest update, and I must say, i love you. i love the relationship between them, the sex, c; the fights, the everything. So, i have obviously subscribed. better update soon! <3

UPDATE!!!!:))))))

*sigh* I miss this story!

Please Update sooooooon ! D;

Y U NO UPDATE FASTER?!

I miss this! Update soon please!

OMGGGG!!!! UPPPPDDDAAAATTTTTEEEEEE!!!! I wanna know what happens neeeexxxxxxtttttttt :P xx

How many chapters are you planning on writing till the story is finished?

Don't get me wrong, I love your story, I was just wondering... :3

I miss the updates! Please come back soon, I'll bring cookies! :D

Update please! Or I'll find out where you live and travel all the way there to shout at you

Such a good story, please update again i feel lile iv been waiting ages!!

I need more of this! Please!

UPDATEEEE!!!

Plz update again this is the highlight of my life