The Air I Would Kill to Breathe. - Comments

  • In A City Of Fools

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    Awe I just love this story so much.
    But Alex and Jack need to get together D: D: D: D: D: They are too qt.
    January 18th, 2011 at 07:26am
  • SailingCeruleanWaves

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    I hope everyone catches them together soon (; I <3 awkwardness.
    January 18th, 2011 at 06:07am
  • Nytestalker

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    Hopefully Alex is FINALLY realizing what exactly Jack means to him.
    It's kinda making me an emotional wreck thinking about it.
    I love this so much.
    Thanks for updating! <3
    January 18th, 2011 at 06:05am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    D'awwwwwww....... Drunk emotional mess Alex is so cute!
    I can't wait for them to get together.

    -kayt
    January 18th, 2011 at 05:42am
  • SilenceLoud

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    okay this story is amazing! update soon :)
    January 18th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • Nytestalker

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    Alex is being a bitch.
    Jack should smack the adorable out of him.
    ...and then right back into him.
    January 17th, 2011 at 06:40pm
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    Alex is just a senstive little bitch. What was Jack supposed to say? Ugh. Alex is irritating me right now. He needs to just figure out what the hell he's feeling b/c sooner or later someones gunna get hurt. I can just sense that.
    Great update!! :D
    January 17th, 2011 at 06:23pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    I don't even have any words. I really loved this chapter. <3

    -kayt
    January 17th, 2011 at 05:04pm
  • n.oxious

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    :3
    great chapter
    loved it
    January 17th, 2011 at 04:58pm
  • deactivate1

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    Just realised I haven't commented on this story yet!
    I feel really bad.
    I actually LOVE this so much! :D
    <3
    January 17th, 2011 at 04:34pm
  • Just.a.Kid

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    I like this story =]
    I think their game should go on ^^ And maybe something should happen on stage?
    I've subscribed!
    update soon?
    January 16th, 2011 at 07:58pm
  • Nytestalker

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    I'm in love with this story.
    I love how neither one of them is technically gay.
    January 16th, 2011 at 12:40am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    So what's he gunna decide? Is he gunna give dating Jack a chance or is he just gunna be confused and not know what he wants and possibly loose Jack? Because we all know how Jack feels around him, I would hate to see him end hurt. I would cry, no doubt.
    Update sooonnn:))
    January 14th, 2011 at 04:43pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    That bitch! I really hate Sophie. Ick. :P

    -kayt
    January 14th, 2011 at 01:19pm
  • n.oxious

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    great chapter
    I liked a lot
    getting to look into his head
    it was rly awesome
    ur an amazing writer
    I can't wait for more
    January 14th, 2011 at 12:57pm
  • MySweetBlasphemy

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    W-O-W that was totally awsome you have to update soon or else I'll send a dead frog to haunt you.
    Amazingly wrote and I see nothing wrong with it.
    I want to know what happens next really really badly.
    UPDATE SOON
    Peace
    AJ
    January 13th, 2011 at 09:11pm
  • n.oxious

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    okay
    VERY hot chapter
    although
    I was kinda hoping that Alex wud leave jack
    as soon as he said I'm gonna come :3
    update soon pleass
    January 13th, 2011 at 09:07pm
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    No. This was soo good. :)
    I wanna see what's going to happen now! Like soo bad.
    January 13th, 2011 at 05:08pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Well, that's one way of apologizing.
    Hot damn!
    :O
    Fantastic chapter.
    :)

    -kayt
    January 13th, 2011 at 01:22pm
  • MySweetBlasphemy

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    Nice friendship time NOW can we get back to the teasing game.
    Sorry but I really really like the teasing game it's well written and it makes me happy, I like things that make me happy.
    peace
    AJ
    update soon please enjoy Reading what you write.
    January 12th, 2011 at 07:46pm