April 21st, 2011 at 04:22am
Love Is a Murder - Comments
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I love it :)April 21st, 2011 at 04:15am
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I love the story.
I love how it's written.
The plotline can become cliche if you don't do it right, but i believe y'all can pull it off. :)April 16th, 2011 at 11:04pm -
I think the concept story is more realistic then a lot of other's I've read. I also think that your writing skills are great, but there's always room for improvement. The way the story plays out is also very realistic and I like how you don't rush it but you don't drag it out. Perfect pace. :)
Its a great story and I love it.April 16th, 2011 at 11:00pm -
Honestly, I love the fuck out of this story and the writing and everything. The portrayal of Mac's blaming of himself is very realistic, as is the "stop-at-nothing-suspicious-friend" and though December doesn't really know Mac that well, his level of concern doesn't seem forced or unrealistic.
I love this story because it's amazing. ^-^April 16th, 2011 at 08:22pm -
Grrr i hate Ryan!!!!!April 16th, 2011 at 08:16pm
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loved it, can't wait for moreApril 16th, 2011 at 08:10pm
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Good for Mac. (him realizing it about Ryan *sneers name*)April 15th, 2011 at 03:13am
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This chapter was absolutely amazing! :)April 14th, 2011 at 09:42pm
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so happy he is alive, and I'm happy that he is finally good break up with dickheadApril 14th, 2011 at 02:57am
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I'm not commenting for Starbucks! Okay maybe just a little but I'm also commenting cos I'm happy you updated! ^-^
I can't wait to see the Mac/Ryan reunion chapter. It's gonna be interesting and I feel I may need to wear my Jerry Springer sweatshirt and chant "JERRY! JERRY!"April 14th, 2011 at 02:56am -
Okay, it wasn't Ryan. But it if would have been Ryan i think the first thing he had been doing would be beating Mac for trying to kill himself. Well I'm also glad that Mac and the others found him first and not Ryan.
I hope Mac will be okay. ._.
Update soon, im looking forward to the next chapter. <3April 10th, 2011 at 05:40pm -
Mac hold on little man you must live! D:
Does Ryan know I mean I got that he came into the room but did he see Mac?
Would he care at all? Hmm... But Im glad it was December who found him(:
I really hope mac makes it through thisApril 9th, 2011 at 08:49pm -
Aww Mac D: please be okay.
I wonder what Ryan's reaction will be . . . o_oApril 9th, 2011 at 05:51pm -
I hope he is gonna make itApril 9th, 2011 at 07:32am
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Don't die Mac. Don't you fucking dare.April 9th, 2011 at 02:44am
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Mac better be okay..April 9th, 2011 at 02:31am
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who could it be? ryan? if its ryan im really not sure how he'll react. beating ihm to fetal won't Be neccessary anymore. but god don't let him die ;_; Mac doesnt deserve all this. keep on writing <3April 8th, 2011 at 10:36pm
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Comment and get Blues Clues I think thats a pretty good deal! :D haha
OH.MY.FLUFFY.UNICORNS! Did Mac really just do that??? But..but... he cant just go doing that DDD: Im gonna kill that boy if he dies(made more sence in my head)
Anyhoe...please update soooon!April 8th, 2011 at 07:27am -
I love this story it is so great. my favorite <3April 8th, 2011 at 05:54am
Loved the new chapter and I'm glad he finally told.
Update soon? :D