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  • Hope.

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    sorry, my friend said I should put some criticism, for the entries.
    so here it is :'D
    *Well, I honestly think there is nothing you could do to make it better, you put full stops and everything in the right place, very descriptive, and of course, what herzschmerz said there; the 'organisms' to 'organs'. :D
    February 6th, 2011 at 03:44pm
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    you're very welcome, very good (:
    February 6th, 2011 at 03:41pm
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    This is very good and excellently described, I would only suggest changing 'organisms' to 'organs' in the first line for accuracy. :)
    January 1st, 2011 at 01:45pm
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