As the World Burns - Comments

Guess what???
Tee hee... I think you already know... But...
I FINISHED ALL 62 CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU OWE ME A CHAPTER NOW!!!!!!!
Jessica/Alice/... Some other name person... STOP TALKING TO HIM ABOUT THE BUBBLEY VOICED FAKES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They don't sound good live :'(
And all that matters is if they sound good live. And if their music is long... Cause if it's not long and it stops every minute and a half so that I have to hear another dumb comment from my brother or some kid screaming out PENIS on the bus I WILL SERIOUSLY CHOP OFF ALL THEIR LEGS!!!!!!!!!! It all goes back to the shortness of the song. Cause there is always a space. Just don't listen to beiber. he's evil and I don't like him. HE DOESN'T LOVE ME!!!!! HE LIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Done with my little rant up there. don't be mad please :'(
OKAY!!!!! SO!!!!!!!
They had to create a distraction for the sniper
Played Bubble gum bubble gum to choose who
I used to play that game
Wes got chosen
He danced and did all these cools moves to dodge the bullets
Jack shot the sniper
or thought he did
Wes stopped dancing and got shot in the shoulder
Lexa left so that she wouldn't laugh at Wes's pain
I Highly believe that Ness is Lexa...Or whoever that characters name is
I believe Ness
Nessy???
IDK!!!!!!! Okay but the bus was destroyed
Kwame ran out and got Wes
Kwame is brave
He needs some ice cream to celebrate!!!!!!!!!!
Cause cookies have eggs in them :'( Saddening no cookies during the zombie Apocalypse. Not a time I want to live in. But if I were to live in it I would be obsessed with ice cream then. Making ice cream... mm....
BUT AWAY FROM THE TOPIC OF TOAST!!!!!!
They went to the building found the guy had left
Found a bucket of bullets with blood in it
So I'm guessing he went back out there and got his bullets back from them
That's why the bodies were butchered so bad!!!
And then... Bob is freaking out...
Layla is a genius...
Lexa is one sexy a-ed mo'fo'
I love skittles
And I love you and Lexa
I GOT CAUGHT UP!!!!!!!!!
FREE WINDOWS FOR EVERY ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YES!!!!
WES IS GOING TO DIE!!!!!!!!
Omg that rhymed... Sorry I was just so excited that I had to say that!!!!!!!!!!

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! IT WAS ABOUT 2 WEEKS EVE!!!!!!!!
2 WEEKS FOR ME TO CATCH UP!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
I'm guessing Jessie was chosen but I'm Hoping that Wes was. He's a douche. Or the druggie. I hope she was chosen. They can get really violent when their suffering withdrawls. How do I know this??? ...Aunt was stupid once. Cleaned up her act and now I'm not afraid to hug her anymore XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO READ THE LAST ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then I will REALLY be caught up.
I LOVE YOU TOO EVE!!!!!!! AND I WILL SMACK THOSE HOES!!!!!!!! Why didn't they just wait until it rained again? It rains a lot in Florida doesn't it??? He can't see them when its raining...

OMG EVE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I EATED A HAM SAMICH WITH MAYONAISE AND MUSTARD!!!!!!!!! IT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's weird though O.o We have a real brain trinity going on here!!! IT'S SO WINDY!!!!!
ON TO CHAPTER 3!!!!!!!!!!

EVE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M AT THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now all I have to do is read these 4 chapters and I'm all caught up XD
And in case you didn't see, Jack is like Jake
Literally it's pretty scary the likeness
All wise manny and stuff
DON'T KILL LAYLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bob needs her :(
And poor Brock
I almost cried but then as Lexa said my white turning cat cuddled me and I was all like NO I WON'T CRY!!!!!! So I didn't
I MADE IT EVE!!!!!!!! I MADE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!
I WANNA GIVE YOU A HUG SO BAD!!!!!!!!! I'M ADDICTED TO YOUR STORY!!!!!! IT'S A DRUG!!!!!! Literally O.o And I'm glad you didn't forget about Nimel cause I did... I WOULD OF REMEMBERED HIM LATER!!!!!!!!
I'm glad you killed those two people that you didn't like in your story cause I didn't like them either :(
BUT LEXA HOLY BIG PICTURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT WAS A LONG!!!!!!!!!!!! COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'M SO EXCITED TO START READING IT!!!!
So I'm going to stop talking and go and start reading it >.O
LOVE YOU EVE!! AND LOVE YOU LEXA!!!!!
HEY!!!!!!! I pressed the one for a long time and it only gave me two :(
Meany one not wanting to give me so many exclamation points...
OMG I'M GOING TO GO READ THE REST OF YOUR STORY NOW!!!!!!!!

Oh noes, whats gonna happeennn? :O
Fantastical update. (:

the bullets are in zombie blood aren't they?
aren't they?
if they are, i am a genius!
lol Layla is awesome
go smart people!

Loved the update :D
I must say that this story is so good, that when I'm reading it's like watching a horror movie.
When ever it starts to build up to the "climax" I get all nervous as to what's going to happen next xD
Either way, it's great :D
Oh and thanks for the shout out (:

OH. MY. GOD!
Dude! This story is freakin' amazing!
I read the prequel in like 3 days, just so I could get started on this one =O
I effin' love it :D
Ha, I'm a huge Zombie fan and I must say these two stories are by far the best I have ever read. EVER! (:

Oh hey all, I'm working on a side project with a little help from Justin, I'm thinking I'll post it on my page when its done so you should all check it out. It's about the living Dalton that I had found and how he should die, lol, not literally die I could never hope that for someone but it is going to be called "(still working on a name) must die"

Hey!! I'm still reading, thanks for the shout out. I'll try not to be as much of a silent reader with this story.

So far I'm liking it... Nelly is cooool in my books, and I can't believe how much I missed all the other characters and their quirks :)

We are working on getting everything done and then publishing it

awesome!!!
I managed to read all of the first story in about two or so days! not around the clock though.
Who got picked???
you should seriously publish this
XD

Woo!
Great update :D
Is it weird that this story makes me nervous when I'm reading it? Haha, but that's what makes it so good :D

Woo!
Great update :D
Is it weird that this story makes me nervous when I'm reading it? Haha, but that's what makes it so good :D

Roarness!
I love it!
Nelly!
Who lost?
You bastard!
Tell me!
Or imma make Randy's white turning cat claw at you in the dark of the night!
I send you my hate over text!
Down with the sniper!
I judge them all!
Is the sniper really a zombie?
Meanie!

Eve!
I love you and I love this chapter!
I would right more but I am lazy today...so lazy....and my fingers hurt from guitar hero...I need tp build up my finger amazingness! And then I will turn lesbian and many a woman will want me! Buahhahahhahah!
Bob's insights scare me...
I want to smack him for his names...
I love Kwame...
And I wnat the next bloody chapter...(which for some reason I said out loud with an Indian accent)...
LOVE YOU!!!!

OH! One more thing....
Thanks for the shout out in your author note! :D
That made me a very happy person =O Haha (:

I effin' love it! It took me forever to read those last few chapters of the prequel, but I got it done none the less :D
This is absolutely great! Can't wait for the next chapter! (: I already miss Roxy and Kwame! Lmao! xD

Eve!
I fucking love you homey!
And its cool if you steal my bit...I stole it form someone else...lets call it recycling, yes?
Good!
And now I annex the comment I wrote when I got this chapter forever ago...Shhh! Nobody tell Eric!

Ok, since you are so worried about this chapter this is going to be half live commentary (I am writing as I am reading) and half me raving at the end of it. Sound good? ...I will take your silence as a yes. Giggle. here it goes...

What the fuck?
Who's point of view is this?
Machete! Fuck yeah! Girl after my own heart!
Well, I assume she is a girl seeing as how she scares guys with it...teehee, I used to do that. Good times dude, good times
Dude! I just almost had a fucking heart attack...she is walking through the fucking dark, she hears something and suddenly..my computer beeps with an incoming email and I jumped out of my fucking skin! Holy shit!
Anywho...
Damn! I would have been pissed too!
Leon is a god send! Music is my life!
Squee! Come back to life!
Fuck! Preggo lady!
Some things cannot be unseen!
My line! Yay!!!!!
Dude, how the fuck did you come up with the baby thing?
That is epicly disturbing...I am kinda nauseous right now
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
Nicole's zombie death is the best.
I find it especially lovely cuz there is this girl I know who shares the name Nicole and she pisses me off. She is a total goody two shoes mormon that is loud stupid and just ugh! She is who I just imagined as zombiefied by swallowing. I love you for this one Eve...I really do.
I have this Eerie sense of Deja vu...
Out of country, noodles, accidentally vegetarian...
Fuck...well there goes Riley's island idea...
Nelly! The name has been revealed!
Finally! Not that it makes much of a difference but its nice to have a name to the face, you know?
Oh! I spoke too soon. Its Penelope!
Dude! I share her pain!
I have been there, I hate myself every time I introduce myself as S****a...I am like "why the fuck didnt I just say Danielle or something!?"
Goddess! Fuck yeah!
Like I said before...a woman after my own heart!
What the fuck? Her thigh is killing her?
Did I miss something?
o.O
Holy fuck! epic start!
New characters! Druggy, douche, music man, preggo lady + significant other and Nelly with the machete...oh yes, oh yes.
You cant see me but I have a big ass smile on my face right now!
I cant wait till this shit is posted and you get the second chapter rolling.
And I am guessing they are gonna hit up with Bob and Jesse at some point, right?
Right?!?!
Author's note time!
Holy fuck! Really?
Oh my fucking Goddess Eve!
I fucking love you right now dude!
Oh wow with the fuck overload.
I am beyond honored!
Dude, that is pretty damn accurate!
...its kind of unnerving actually, how well you know me...
How the fuck would I be angered?
This is so damn awesome!
LOL! Sorry that your trick didnt work. Its just that alex has special meaning to me cuz my sister named me that. :P
Damn, Wes is a douche but i still kinda like him.
Brain love right back at you!
Sex via literature...this chapter was like the best orgasm of my brains life!
I love you Eve!
You have no idea!
I am so fucking pumped and excited and honored and happy and smiley and...and...dammit!
I wanna hug you!
And jump around like a fool.
And dance!
And sing!
And...yeah!