Heyy, I read this story a long time ago and I'm shocked that there isn't more of it. I loved this story and I really think you should write more. Please! -x-
there were a few grammar mistakes, i think you should read through it to pick those out, but as far as the story itself its really good, and i enjoyed the update, more please :D
I loved this story and I really think you should write more.
Please!
-x-