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  • animrod

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    Mm I really like this idea and this story.
    But wait, is he ten years old in high school?
    Haha, sorry if I'm being ignorant.
    I'm subscribing, it's awesome.
    February 24th, 2008 at 09:59pm
  • imername

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    yes u really must right more, although lol i thought it was about tre at first then i got it. very good *enthusiastic thumbs up*
    February 1st, 2008 at 12:23pm
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    It was pretty good, but you should split up your paragraphs.

    It looks really intimidating with the huge paragraphs, and it can make the reader lose interest.

    But I love the idea, and you should definitely continue. (and besides...I've read waaaaay worse. ;))
    January 20th, 2008 at 09:06pm
  • MyNameIsNo_One

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    Aww, you reallyshould must continue.

    You've made a really good start, the introduction especially drew me. You're a pretty good writer.

    :XD
    January 20th, 2008 at 10:28am
  • CheeseandPotatoes

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    i think you should continue, its good :):)
    January 20th, 2008 at 09:28am
  • lucky_star

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    i like :]
    and yes you should continue es very good Thumb up
    January 20th, 2008 at 03:54am
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