I was on the verge of tears reading this. I love your work so much I wish you would start up again and update your stories. Can't wait to see what happens and keep up the spectacular work!!!
I really like this. It has enough emotion to be heartbreaking at the right moments, yet not so much that it's extremely sappy and over exaggerated. Update soon! <3
I'm really intrigued by this story. The story line (from what is given) seems like a really great idea and leaves a lot of possibilities. The show of emotions in the two chapters alone is well-done which I think is really great in a story. I'm really excited to read more :D