Lust - Comments

Please update this, I'm honestly begging you here.

Please tell me you're going to update soon? :C
This story is amazing! And I'm dying to know what happens next! :3

In chapter 2: 1) The thought of Oliver sleeping in just boxers makes me: diofhiudsgfysdgfy :3 <3
2) "Did I mention they’re triplets," Then in the same paragraph, "When the twins were born, I learned how to be responsible and all that shit."

From chapter 1 I can say:
1) Elijah is hot and plus I love that name, so added bonus for me!
2) I enjoyed your little reference to the angelic aspect at the end of the chapter.
3) The family atmosphere was very believable and though I was reading, I could see the "scene" play out fluidly in my head.
4) Do Elijah's parents know he's gay? Does he know he's gay? Yea, I can those things be answered later on, but I'm impatient. ~_~
Pretty banner, too.

This is amazing. I'm actually be thankful for my insomnia since it lead me to this story. Thanks kitsch for suggesting this. :]

Yay! Two updates :D Just made my night, lol.
Both chapters got me so excited! Especially in end where both of you decided to leave it off on a good part -.-
Bad grammar my ass :O It was perfect, I was intrigued by your word choice. Definitely not just a "boring filler chapter." I love the disctinction between the two characters, and I can't wait until the story unfolds to when they meet. Sooo excited. :D

That did not suck at all c: of course, the beginning is always difficult to pick up, but I think that filler chapters are the best. It gives the most insight in the characters. :)) keep writing! I can't wait to see where this goes :) :D
Oh and just so you know, I'll be commenting on every update :3 as creepy as that sounds. Hahaha. But I'll distinguish it by mentioning the characters.

ohhh wows :) I'm mega intruiged by this, I have no clue where its going and I love that!! I love the characters too, dude!
this story really deserves more comments :O
please update soon! <3

I'm lovin' the story so far! :D I never read a collaborative story before, so this should be interesting :)
The characters are really enthralling, and I love how both chapters written were juxtaposed, making Elijah and Olivier seem like two completely different people with obscure similarities..xD
Wonderful writing styles to both of you :)
P.S. I wasn't laughing because it was bad. Not at all. I just found it ironic in the end where Olivier is denying the existence of "fairytale creatures" and angels, when the summary obviously reveals that there are!
It's awesome though, how their lives practically parallel with each other! Can't wait for the two to meet. cx

BABES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update Update Update Update NOW!!!!!!!!!
Please And Thank You =)

It's so beautiful to my eyes! hahah. The summary is so...captivating. I mean, its simple yet its like...it pulls you in and leaves you wanting more (yet it's not even a chapter). MORE. I love it already. Update soon? :D