This was really beautiful, and I adore your use of language and storytelling. However, i do wonder why this isn't in the poetry section. Even though it tells a story, poetry is the form. But it's beautiful regardless. I love the line "His name was Albert, he danced to her music once in a while." Another nitpick- I can barely read the third paragraph (stanza?) because the word DREAM is totally obstructing my view.