I just SCREAMED when I got the email for this :) I loved it, like I always do. Your writing, especially that of the twins (their dialogue and personalities), is very authentic to how I think children would really act, and Sid is absolutely adorable with them. I particularly loved the parts with the noodles and the worms, haha. Can't wait for more!!
love it! don't leave us in suspense for too long! :P and i think i'm going to have a hard time letting go of this story when the time comes, its just too cute!:)
I can imagine that Jasmine's parents would be a little concerned about her getting involved with Sidney - the fact he is famous and the fact that he is a father of two young children. It is not the ideal situation for any girl to walk into.
While I love her character, in some ways it might be more realistic if Sid and Jasmine did break up. I mean how many of us find someone on the first try. Sid may have to experience a little heartbreak before he finds "the one".
But I will wait to see what direction you go with this. You are a great writer.