Chasing Forever - Comments

I love your stories. You should update more often!!

OMG This is so amazing. It literally made me cry! More:)

This is really good (I only got to read three chapters :/ ) but what I read so far is really good.
I love the banner its simple and yet very nice, same with the layout.
The summary was short but yet had to where I wanted to read more, I could relate to the summary in some way.
Every detail is very good, I like your writing style.
Overall this is a very good story and I will read more later :)

This is probably some of the best writing I've read on here. It's got a fabulous hook and the writing is good - unlike the fanfictions that crowd this site. You definitely deserve more comments. It's just... really good. To be really repetitive.
Best of luck!
Bee

I thought the layout was very nice :)
It was simple yet pretty :)
Especially the banner, I loved that. <3
The first chapter was really good and I loved the details in the second chapter too.
But it was sort of hard to read because you didn't really space the paragraphs. :S
Other than that it was really good <3

I love the way you wrote the prologue. It got me hooked. But I think you should put a whole line between your paragraphs and check your mistakes.

Other than that the story is brilliant :) keep writing!

I like the layout for this. Normally, I really, really perfer a different color beneath the words, but now, I find I don't mind. Because your words are readable against the color where as most people forget that and the entire layout is illegible. But this layout? This layout is cute and yummy. 6: <33

I like the opening chapter. I really got a sense of the heartbreak this character - this person - feels. How she hurt when she made a friend out of someone she never expected. How she hurt when her life changed. How she felt when her everything went away. It kind of hits home with me, in a way. I love it. <33

I really, really like your detail, but might I suggest spacing out your paragraphs a bit? It'd make everything a bit easier to read, and it'd look more organized. Just a suggestion. :)

Anyways, this is lovely. C: Your writing is flawless and I like how I feel a sense of history just beneath the surface of your words. I'm subbing because I'm eager to see where this goes. :) <3