I got this for the comment swap, and so far I really like this story! :) I’ve only read the first chapter, but I found it really easy to read – your writing style is good and it flows really well. And I don’t think I spotted any spelling/grammar mistakes, which is always good :) I think you could use a bit more description in places, like describing the camp for example, but otherwise it’s really good so far :)
Damn woman. Updating 3 times in less than 2 days. Chu makin' me feel lazy with my gazillion stories. I loved the updateS - yes it needed the S for all of them. Update soon please.