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  • The Color Abi

    The Color Abi (300)

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    Just. Wow.

    I love your use of words, how short this piece is and how perfect it is. This is brilliant, it really is.
    June 12th, 2012 at 01:08am
  • chemicalkid101

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    This is great! I can't even think of a way to describe how brillaint it is <3
    May 28th, 2011 at 01:41pm
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    First off, that picture of Gerard was gorgeous and perfectly suited the story. This entire story was very well written; it seemed very plausible, which is also a bonus. I also like how, even though you said that it was implied that it was Frank narrating it, that the narrator could really be anybody in the world. I thought this piece was very well-written and I enjoyed it. (:
    February 10th, 2011 at 02:46am
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