This is exactly why I don't like getting too into a story because those comments are a year old and your story left off on a clifdhanger. Oh well, if you are even still here, I hope you update soon.
i really like this, but can i suggest that you space out paragraphs? i mean i have no problem reading it like this but its more...organised? when you space out the paragraphs and it makes the chapters longer. like i said i really like this :D
Still greaat.! Haha woOow how sad for Percy.! He had to watch them flirting. :/ But still higghlarious.! Sorry I cant write much this time cause im like supeerr tired.! But I totally will next time kay.? <3 it cant wait for more.!