Beauty and Beast - Comments

I like the photo that you have used for this story :)

In the prologue you have started in mid-situation. I like this because I don't know what has happened before to make him think this all about her but, still marry her. He is already questioning himself.

You have created Caledonia to be more interested in other men than her potiental husband. This difinitely adds to the mystery. What is she going to do next?

I like this. Well done! :) <3

Oh, goddamn. This story was beautiful. I'm so subscribing. Really, the description was flawless. Everything flowed smoothly and precisely, giving air and room for things to grow as the story continued to stretch itself above my heart. <3 I'm in love with this. I'm actually really liking Hiram; scar or not, he is one awesome son of a gun. Not that I care about his story money, but especially with that and still being able to have at least a good heart--which I have a feeling that he does have--he is awesome in my eyes. I can't wait to see what you bring for us next. c: <3

-Luna

The layout is so pretty! The banner is well made and everything seems to fit together. The color scheme is nice, too.

This was beautifully written and incredibly descriptive. Chapter one was, of course, short, but had wonderful development in it. The dialogue was realistic and the way you integrated his thoughts was smooth and very professional. It didn't sound choppy at all. The last line in that first chapter was so piercing and, well, beautiful.

The second chapter introduced Cally really well and set up the plot in a way that wasn't confusing.

This really is a great story and I will be subscribing!

I like the background. It looks really good! Your banner looks awesome! The story itself puts you in to this world. When I read the title I thought, 'so it will be maybe very cutey, lovey dovey type or such', but I was completely wrong! It was brillently structured and making me want to know what happens next!! I'm left in the cold thinking whats going to happen?!? Your writing style is really good. I love the last line. "We're all ugly Ella. Yours simply resides in your heart. One would have thought you'd come to accept that by now." :D

So many questions left after reading that. Ah, ha. Very beautiful prose, I hope you know. You, my friend, are a beautiful writer. I really love the layout and banner. <3

So, I don't have too much to say. All I can really put are the good, since there was no bad. I love the description and the way you have the characters going. I can't wait for more development and for the story to unravel. That is just a long way of putting, "I'm effing subscribing! :D"

I'm really interested in the two female characters of the prologue. Ooo, can't wait for more. Update soon~!

It's amazing eventhough it's short.

Short, but swet! <3 I loved this story. Teehee. I like the personalities you've given to all your characters so far. Oh and beautiful lay out and banner like always. Oh and I can't seem to spell today. >:O I shall wait for the next chapter. <3

I can't wait for more!

It was just very intriguing and beautifully written that you can't
help but want to read more.

The layout was a bit hard to read though, just sayin'.

Anyways, great job and i'm definitely subscribing. :)
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So fucking good wifey!! I love it so far and can't wait for more!!