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  • Noir-et-Blanc

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    The scream at the end... why!? Why the cliff hanger D; OFIJewijofijow ;-; You better update tomorrow or today or you'll drive me crazy ;-;
    August 13th, 2011 at 11:57pm
  • akanevampire19

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    I want Serena and Nathan together =) but not so soon. I think a little drama before they are together would be awesome! =)
    August 3rd, 2011 at 12:13am
  • SHYLA01

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    OOOHHHHH!
    haha and so it begins!
    July 27th, 2011 at 03:55am
  • Moy.Ms.CElle15

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    Love, Love, Love, as always!!!! Hope you keep writing!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 06:29am
  • SHYLA01

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    OHHHH where are the going!??!
    July 12th, 2011 at 07:44am
  • ScaryMonster

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    I absolutely love the line “and you are my family too.” It was really touching! :) Can't wait for the update!
    June 26th, 2011 at 08:07am
  • SHYLA01

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    OK. Awwwwww and sad. :( Great update
    June 25th, 2011 at 04:42pm
  • Moy.Ms.CElle15

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    As you know I love this story, and your character page is looking gooood, lol. Hope Serena & Nathan end up together in the end, love their chemistry. I bout cried on the last chapter, though. BTW thanks : ) it touched my heart!!! Can't wait till the next update!
    June 25th, 2011 at 06:48am
  • Moy.Ms.CElle15

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    you've got mail : )
    June 25th, 2011 at 05:34am
  • Moy.Ms.CElle15

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    Hey, you got a message : )
    June 23rd, 2011 at 09:46pm
  • Moy.Ms.CElle15

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    I sent you the revised edition of the characters to make it less confusing hope it helps : ) Can't wiat till your next update!!
    June 22nd, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • Moy.Ms.CElle15

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    I sent you a message of the pics for DNA characters. Sorry if it looks messy, but I hope you like it!!! Can't wiat for the next update, I love your story!!
    June 22nd, 2011 at 05:09am
  • j'adore.

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    Oh my god.
    Who is she gonna call?
    It's killing me.
    D:
    June 20th, 2011 at 08:05pm
  • SHYLA01

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    Wha's the age gap between those two? I fogot. She's 16 now Nathan's....?
    Great story. Heart warming.
    June 20th, 2011 at 12:27pm
  • Thumbs up bish!

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    This is amazing ! Can't wait for an update (:
    June 20th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • Moy.Ms.CElle15

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    I actually really love this story I don't find anything wrong. I wish you had pics to it but I made my own to go with it. So i can't wait till the next chapter, hope you update soon!!!!
    June 17th, 2011 at 07:05am
  • bob nathaniel bryar

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    This is a great story so far and will be waiting for one of your updates. :D
    June 16th, 2011 at 05:45pm
  • SHYLA01

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    Great update :D
    Piggy backs; love i.
    But remember; racism, discriminain a big no no, she was th bigger woman, even at 15. Also she has to dump her shitty friend because she brings her down (which mates shouldn't do)
    June 16th, 2011 at 04:26pm
  • sdlove00

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    Aww i love this story. It seems so real and just down to earth. One of the best i've ever read. And i love the biracial part in it. There aren't many storys like that so this makes it even more intriging Keep it up!!!!
    June 15th, 2011 at 06:42pm
  • Star Angel

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    more please love this so much
    June 11th, 2011 at 03:49am
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