This story is very promising! I'll be interested to find out what happens next! :D I hope they get together or something! Or at least try to work it out. I dunno. I don't know what will happen, but I can't wait to find out :D
hum, 'now what?'... I think Gee's going to push Frank away, because of an unknown reason... it seems that the story is heading that way, you know? anyway, I love this, is perfect *w*
I love the way this story started and I agree with Love_Kas in that maybe you should turn the tables and make gerard a bit of a homophobe or something like that for a few chapters... Just to keep it interesting? But I definately love this story :)
I like it! Personally I think maybe Gee should deny his feelings because Frank seemed more sure of himself the way he confronted Gerard about it. But it's your story :) Nice work!!
This story definitely got a bit of a rusty start, but now it's just awesome. I love all the emotion an insecuirity this last chapter. You are an amazing writer, never forget that.